Here is a list of things you can do to help fix OneNote not saving changes to a shared notebook on a Mac:
- Make sure you are using the latest version of OneNote
- Quit and restart OneNote on your Mac
- Sign out of Office and OneNote and then sign in again
- Uninstall Office for Mac and then reinstall it
- Check your Internet connection
- Disable third-party antivirus to check if it is causing the issue